This was great to read (even though it's scary)!
Dim always seems so instable that it's never clear what he will do next... so creepy... I'm always afraid to keep reading because of worrying about Shion's safety. Dim's actions are really the complete opposite of Timid's!
(So happy that the voice clips were useful! w And I'm glad you wrote this scene! It doesn't matter that a green-haired gunner did something similar by coincidence. Similar action... but totally different situation and mood! w)
I also like the relationship between Zenzai and Dim...
And it's really interesting (and good) that DuskBrawl also seems to know a bit more about the situation than the others at home...! (Did he and Zenzai also talk about Dim or did he just understand the situation from the context?)
Maybe Dusk will mention something at home... and then Timid might really become aware that there's a dangerous rival! He really needs to talk to his friends soon about what has happened in the forest, and also ask Shion more about Dim... before something else happens. (recent error battle)
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お読みいただきありがとうございます！
ボイスクリップのおかげで決心できました！！ そうそうシチュエーションが全然違うから良いかな……とは思いました……ｗ
Duskさんはぜんざいから何か聞いてたか、それとも何か察したか、どっちもありそうですね！
シオンがちゃんとTimidさんに話せばいいんですが……隠してるつもりじゃないんですが、一回誰かに話した情報と同じ内容を他の人にも共有するっていう発想があんまり無いみたいです。あと報告自体も結構抜けがあるので、例えば今回だと指舐められた話はしないと思いますｗ
DuskさんがTimidさんに情報共有してくれると良いかもしれないですね！
Dim always seems so instable that it's never clear what he will do next... so creepy... I'm always afraid to keep reading because of worrying about Shion's safety. Dim's actions are really the complete opposite of Timid's!
(So happy that the voice clips were useful! w And I'm glad you wrote this scene! It doesn't matter that a green-haired gunner did something similar by coincidence. Similar action... but totally different situation and mood! w)
I also like the relationship between Zenzai and Dim...
And it's really interesting (and good) that DuskBrawl also seems to know a bit more about the situation than the others at home...! (Did he and Zenzai also talk about Dim or did he just understand the situation from the context?)
Maybe Dusk will mention something at home... and then Timid might really become aware that there's a dangerous rival! He really needs to talk to his friends soon about what has happened in the forest, and also ask Shion more about Dim... before something else happens. (recent error battle)